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Submitted: September 30, 2011
Image Size: 5.4 MB
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The One You Wait Forby =dorkypyro

Photography / People & Portraits / Fashion Portraits

Joi Carey
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Critique by ~jmarchitto Sep 30, 2011, 8:01:03 PM

Vision: I give this a 4 because the execution, framing, title are all perfect! I can't stress that enough. Perfect. There are 2 things I would like to say though....The piece of jewelery could have been better placed, the little red spikes make me wonder, is it jewelery? clothing? shadow? It takes the focus away from her beautiful face. Also, the red streak is a brilliant addition, but crimson red tends to make natural red hair look washed out. Green would have made her hair color pop a little more.

Originality: I give this a 5 because I just love it. It's perfect. The red hair, green eyes, red on the face, it all works together to create a very strong image! The expression on her face is playful and serious at the same time. Totally brilliant posing, hair color etc. Even the space of white on the left adds to the originality of them image. Most people would have done a closeup or beauty shot to showcase her lovely expression and makeup. Everything works together to create a fluid and original image.

Technique: Nothing to complain about here! You evidently know how to coordinate light, makeup, subject, camera to create a perfect image...It's all bang on!

Impact: I gave you 4.5 because of the misplaced jewelery. Other than that, this is perfection!!

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*LashelleValentine Feb 7, 2013 Student Photographer

This is gorgeous!!! I am going to request it to be in the group Lovely-Diophysitic. If you're not already a part of this group then I hope you will consider joining and submitting more of your fantastic work! You can click here [link] to get to the group and see your work in the gallery if you accept the invitation